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Beautiful indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on July 15, 2008 at 4:41 AM
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Interesting weaving of ideas!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 14, 2008 at 3:17 PM
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Excellent write. keep up good work
posted by
skye08
on July 14, 2008 at 2:44 PM
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that really was excellent. you're going on my favorites, because i love your style. i especially liked your ending here, it drove home the meaning.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 14, 2008 at 2:32 PM
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Most excellent work
I thought the poem was super. The feel and smell of rain brings back fond memories.
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 14, 2008 at 12:37 PM
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To feel the forlorn of the unloved after once having experienced the exquisite agony of loving and being loved in return, is akin to having the world turned upside down, or the loveliest of photographs turned into an unrecognizable negative. See what your poem did to me.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 14, 2008 at 9:54 AM
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