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hehe - doomed is right - heard that
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 14, 2008 at 9:29 AM
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Pawn
OK.. so each breath takes us one breath closer the death but what the heck we might as well breathe between now and then.
posted by
Troosha
on July 14, 2008 at 7:39 AM
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Great poem 666... very unique and modern. loved it
posted by
Sinome
on July 13, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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...you're really a quite excellent poet...really very talented...could be a hit in a 'nuvo beat' kinda way...seriously...disagree about your birth...your unfulfilled desires and your unexpiated karma (which is 'you') brought you back...give up desire (attachment and aversion)...let your karma resolve....you don't have to be born again...Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on July 13, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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Pawn,
.. just breathe, don't think.. just breathe.. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 13, 2008 at 6:33 PM
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