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No don't let the bad win, over come darling it can be done
well I try to anyway.
posted by Kabu on July 14, 2008 at 8:30 AM | | reply |
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 15, 2008 at 6:17 PM
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Life is full of such disappointments in people
and those of us who love and give them chances are called simple fools. But we are holy fools, instead, not valuing what the world values. We see, in its victories, defeats of the soul, and, in its defeats, love triumphant.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on July 14, 2008 at 11:43 AM
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Purple
Your closing line(s) to your post usually bring your entire poem into focus for me - as was the case today. You definitely write with a great deal of passion....
posted by
Troosha
on July 14, 2008 at 10:20 AM
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Very well done Jen, as always
hope you are well; take care my friend and God bless always
posted by
mariaki
on July 14, 2008 at 5:17 AM
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so it goes ...
Excellent! Love. lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on July 14, 2008 at 4:57 AM
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Great wordplay ~ imagery is powerful --- and with your typical 'wisdom' ~
Elyse ~~~ Write on Jen...
posted by
elysianfields
on July 13, 2008 at 10:22 PM
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Jen this is great... as always. I have missed reading you, sorry, but things were complicated, I intend to remedy that :-) I hope you are feeling OK. Take care of you .
posted by
Sinome
on July 13, 2008 at 10:21 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on July 13, 2008 at 8:22 PM
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Wow Jen... Excellent!
I see that NiteTide has already said that, and I hate to be repetitive of others, but I can't think of a more appropriate word.
Great work, as always! 
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on July 13, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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Excellent...as always!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 13, 2008 at 6:33 PM
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