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Very moving, and it rings a bell for me
The theme of unrequited (or only partially requited love...) sometimes I wonder why we do it to ourselves - Great stuff - I like all the work you've done on this theme.
posted by
resurrectionman
on July 17, 2008 at 3:08 AM
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skilled and soulful
what an excellent poem for the ladies
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 14, 2008 at 12:40 PM
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This is so powerful ~ so moving...and this line captured me: "If you love me in my desire
I will see light brighter than thousand suns" ~ so Powerful!!~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 13, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Well written and lovely...
posted by
Marineair
on July 13, 2008 at 5:23 PM
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Love begets love for some, and love can be reciprocated sublimely and imperfectly in many
ways. This poem stirred me all up and I love it.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 13, 2008 at 4:37 PM
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Great poem Kaizz... just beautifully written and conceptualized
posted by
Sinome
on July 13, 2008 at 1:28 PM
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