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posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 14, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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It makes me wonder at the significance of the jasmine...
...It's mentioned in a few of your poems. Remembrances of home? - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 13, 2008 at 4:51 PM
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Sinome, it's hard to believe that you write these poems in your third language. You do it so well. I've not noticed grammatical errors. I think the beauty of the poems would take attention away from them anyway if they were present.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 13, 2008 at 2:23 PM
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Sad and beautiful .... moonbeams and shadows will always turn into
sunshine and clarity if you give it time :) Of course it turns back into moonbeams and shadows again lol. Muah Sinome!
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 13, 2008 at 1:40 PM
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I came back because I wanted to say the warmth of having just enjoyed a loving relationship in more than one facet was genuine. The holding on is a by product of that encounter that was so easy to keep and bask in! Loved it! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 13, 2008 at 1:21 PM
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Feeling just fine! What a lovely poem! I just felt good all over! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 13, 2008 at 12:45 PM
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Although sad today, you always offer up a stunning write!
posted by
Troosha
on July 13, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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So sad, so melancholic and yet---so soothing. You have an outstanding talent to paint with words. Thanks for your comment and no, Turks don't speak arabic. Turkish is a totally different language. And - you mom is so right about the opening doors.
posted by
vogue
on July 13, 2008 at 4:29 AM
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very beautiful 
posted by
magic_moon
on July 13, 2008 at 2:33 AM
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scent and memory ...
beautifully combined for sentimentality to peak love! lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 13, 2008 at 12:51 AM
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That's gorgeous....memories hidden in moon beams and shadows......how beautiful a picture you can paint in my mind - even the saddest tales are wonderful within your words!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 13, 2008 at 12:07 AM
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