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Re: Gripping Story

Good point, about wondering about Steve.  I guess I was hoping you'd pick up on the fact that the couple got rid of the mirror when the trash man found it next to a dumpster and it ended up in another antique shop. I was allowing the reader to fill in the blanks as to whether or not the couple continued to live in their apartment or moved away and didn't tell Savannah.

Thanks for dropping in.  I appreciate the feedback.

Kris

 

posted by ChristianHorrorWriter on July 17, 2008 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

Gripping Story
I ended up reading it back to front but it still had me hitting the scroll button to read more. I didn't quite understand what happened to Steve, though... great story!

posted by resurrectionman on July 16, 2008 at 1:02 AM | link to this | reply

Great
morality tale!

posted by Luz_Briar on July 13, 2008 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you for visiting my blog. Appreciate your kind words.

posted by ChristianHorrorWriter on July 12, 2008 at 11:11 PM | link to this | reply

Very engaging...
...and welcome to blogit. You should do well here.
Take your shoes off, get comfortable and stay a while.

posted by metalrat on July 12, 2008 at 10:42 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, vickip - I appreciate you reading my blog and hope my work will
continue to entertain you and my readers.  It gives me great pleasure to share my writing with you.   Kris

posted by ChristianHorrorWriter on July 12, 2008 at 10:18 PM | link to this | reply

This is wonderful and so engrossing. Welcome to blogit ...
your work will be appreciated here! 

posted by VictoriaP on July 12, 2008 at 4:20 PM | link to this | reply