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Very entertaining! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 12, 2008 at 1:36 PM
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I love the witch too.
Yes, she looks just like me,
just joking!
posted by
kittybaby
on July 12, 2008 at 1:28 AM
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I love that old hag!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 12, 2008 at 1:22 AM
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No problem whatsoever!!! Anytime darlin'
huggles to you!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 11, 2008 at 11:59 PM
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Thank's for your help honey.
posted by
kittybaby
on July 11, 2008 at 11:47 PM
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Great fix. Yes, this is a haiku. Everyone uses the term of haiku loosely and takes it only as a 5/7/5 syllable format. If you want to get technical, then a haiku is a 5/7/5 syllable poem that only talks about love or nature. If you want to get even more technical, there is something also called the senryu which is also 5/7/5 but only talks about human nature or emotions. But, somehow the translation was lost and people these days only know it as a 5/7/5 poem. Which is completely fine!!!!! Did this help?
posted by
NiteTide
on July 11, 2008 at 11:41 PM
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Hi nitetide, I want to ask you is this a haiku poem or is it some other form of poetry?
posted by
kittybaby
on July 11, 2008 at 11:08 PM
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helloooo darlin!!! What a nifty haiku!!!!!!! LOL. By the way, hon, did you notice you only had 4 syllables in the first line? Regardless, this poem was absolutely cute!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 11, 2008 at 11:06 PM
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