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heart breaking...
posted by
Star5_
on July 13, 2008 at 5:03 AM
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how sad
posted by
Lanetay
on July 12, 2008 at 1:07 PM
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What an ending
I loved the pic you chose of the eye bleeding masque! Splendid illustration; strong to go with your strong words. My oldness comes out when I started humming in my mind, "Where Have All the Flowers Gone."
Cee 
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on July 12, 2008 at 9:47 AM
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Pls don't forget Darfur and Zimbabwe in your prayers
Those people are suffering terribly. I understand that Indonesia is still soffering as well.
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 12, 2008 at 9:46 AM
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You have such a beautiful creation with your words filled with emotions.
I believe we have been so numbed with news overload we have become numb to the violence that surrounds us to protect our self.
posted by
skye08
on July 12, 2008 at 5:57 AM
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Really good poem...you should try to have that published in that part
of the world.
posted by
Ariala
on July 12, 2008 at 4:52 AM
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Loved the line...
"Taste the vile impediment of spoiled sentiments". So wonderfully well worded. Beautiful poem. Thank you - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 12, 2008 at 3:44 AM
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Of course this has your signature Passion Jen ~ stunning and so vivid. It is sad that yes, Africa - so many nations - so many countries and children, elderly - so many go unnoticed as uncared for, neglected and forgotten...it breaks my heart but again, we can only do what we can --- those that can. May God bless all ~ Elyse
Good poem, made me ponder
posted by
elysianfields
on July 11, 2008 at 10:47 PM
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garddaym, thats a good one...
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 11, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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Indeed ...
"...Taste the incessant torture at hand ..." Purple Mermaid
Excellent! lol, BCA!
posted by
BC-A
on July 11, 2008 at 7:59 PM
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I think they care but nobody wants to talk about it.
posted by
shelly_b
on July 11, 2008 at 6:03 PM
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