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Beautiful!
Your poetry stirs my soul. Thank you.
posted by
MaliDee
on July 12, 2008 at 12:44 PM
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What wonderfully grand imagery!
Nice job! - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 11, 2008 at 4:40 PM
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I really, really enjoyed this poem my friend! I was taken with this line:
Time catches with your dreamy songs in lazy strides such power! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 11, 2008 at 2:34 PM
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thanks for the entry
posted by
slam
on July 11, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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Stunning....
posted by
Troosha
on July 11, 2008 at 8:30 AM
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In my darker moment I always thought that there was beauty in death. Thanks for the uplifting note though. Very beautiful.
posted by
vogue
on July 11, 2008 at 6:34 AM
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though spoken through a melancholy voice, I was uplifted by this and felt that you described a fantastic place
posted by
Kobriel
on July 11, 2008 at 5:45 AM
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Beautiful poem my friend!
lovely flow and feels genuinely loving; thank you and God bless; have a wonderful weekend my dear
posted by
mariaki
on July 11, 2008 at 5:44 AM
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Captivating and passionate ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 11, 2008 at 5:23 AM
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Excellent, Kyzzaman, most wonderful feel to the melancholy notes
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 11, 2008 at 5:23 AM
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Beautiful work!
posted by
Ariala
on July 11, 2008 at 5:18 AM
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