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Now this is REAL poetry!!
posted by
DeeJay101
on July 11, 2008 at 8:46 AM
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Hot Dang...
That is one romatic piece you got there. Awesome
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 11, 2008 at 8:22 AM
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"There is no greater sorrow than to recall, in misery, the time when we were happy." ---Dante
I was touched by the panicky love, that you revealed.
posted by
Kobriel
on July 11, 2008 at 5:01 AM
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Beatifully done!
You have some incredible images and phrases in there - great work!!!
posted by
lionreign
on July 11, 2008 at 1:52 AM
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The first cut is the deepest ... this is what I kept thinking whiile
reading your wonderful poem ... it really is so good. Thank goodness father time heals.
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 10, 2008 at 8:41 PM
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Re:
Actually, we're just friends now. It was one of those long-term relationships that ended on a high note for the better for both of us. We still keep in touch, and she's one of my biggest fans (please note, I use the word fans a little liberally. I have like 4) :) - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 10, 2008 at 8:24 PM
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ups....i mean, does she know how you miss her? :)
posted by
lyknliken
on July 10, 2008 at 8:22 PM
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I don't want you to get the wrong idea...
It's not like I go around peddling haikus and sweet nothings to a bunch of random dudes to help them make...um...connections. That one guy happened to be around when I finished writing it. ;) - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 10, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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sweet.... does she how you miss her?
posted by
lyknliken
on July 10, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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Um I agree with NiteTide...I read it a couple of times...LOL ~ WOW!~ what a girl wouldn't do to have this written about - to her. Write on!!!~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 10, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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I think he's used it 3 separate times...
I laugh every time I see him. I guess he's a fairweather friend of poetry. Did I just coin a phrase?
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 10, 2008 at 8:10 PM
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I can see why it is "stolen" and "used" often by your friends!! LOL. Any girl would want to go out with that person after seeing this. Sheesh!!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 10, 2008 at 8:09 PM
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Thanks for reading!
This poem is noteable as the one most stolen by my buddies to send to their current flames.
I've even had one guy use it more than once. ;)... Hope you guys like it... - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 10, 2008 at 7:54 PM
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