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hey there kittybaby,
what a deep and timeless poem.. i totally loved it...keep it up...mike
posted by
meeks2
on July 10, 2008 at 10:07 PM
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As the others have commented...that last line just blew my mind. WOW. You have made heartbreak into an art-form! amazing!!!
Oh, and thanks for dropping in and creating such a wonderful haiku!! 
posted by
NiteTide
on July 10, 2008 at 9:12 PM
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WOW, the ending is superb!!! this is well-written. Write on...and this touched my heart.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 10, 2008 at 7:54 PM
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"From written love I can't delete..."
That line hit me hard. Awesome work!
posted by
Kobriel
on July 10, 2008 at 5:34 PM
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