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Longo-Geremia ~.~
I'm afraid no defensive weapons have been found (any used are only temporarily effective.) Memories never die. Great write! Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 10, 2008 at 2:52 PM
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Interesting...
I liked how you switched rhythmic and conceptual gears to come to a full stop. It made me pay more attention immediately and read the poem again. Nice job. - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 10, 2008 at 1:35 PM
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