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Re: Absolutely stunning, my friend!
Thank you so much Teddy... it was written for a friend who I hold close to my heart.
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Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 10:11 PM
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Elyse you are always so kind, thanks
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Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 10:05 PM
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MArion, humbling words ,
thanks.
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Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 10:04 PM
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Re: WOW this is simply awesome my dear Sinome
Thank you MAria...you are sweet.
posted by
Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 10:03 PM
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Less!!! thank you so much... I am waiting for your next masterpiece... Get to write!!!
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Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 10:03 PM
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Re: true love really is a mixture of pain and joy of tears and laughter.
Thanks Kabu...that is so true... Thank you :-)
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Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 10:02 PM
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wow Moon...thank you so much... :-)
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Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 10:01 PM
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Re: yup, incredible write
I see what you mean 666. If there is no free will we do not chose to be blinded by desire...we are powerless against our emotions for they are pre-ordained. I happen to agree with you to a point. I think that the powers to be know what is going to happen. They know what we will choose which makes our choosing not "free" I guess... but I swear that I never intended to go that philosophically deep in this poem. All I tried to portray there was the fact that if one is pursuing carnal pleasures and not the completion of ones incomplete soul... one is missing the point as they say. Anyway, thank you so much for your comment
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Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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Re: Sinome ~.~
Thank you Soulspeaker, I do believe what I wrote, Love IS never lost.
posted by
Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 9:54 PM
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Thank you 101... you are too kind
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Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 9:53 PM
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Excellent! This is surely the best post I have read today! There is an empathy which challenges the readers to see or not!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 10, 2008 at 4:22 PM
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Sinome ~.~
This is such a beautiful poem. I especially like the line..."Love is not love of only one, love is life itself." This is so true -- really very insightful. Love is never "lost." Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
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soulspeaker
on July 10, 2008 at 1:55 PM
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yup, incredible write
But as far as "self chosen blindness" goes though; the fact that we don't ask to be born seems to indicate we don't have complete free will, if any at all. Sure it sells books etc. but it's not a scientific fact.
posted by
Sudanym_
on July 10, 2008 at 11:38 AM
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...phenomenal...phenomenal...phenomenal...wonderful...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on July 10, 2008 at 9:29 AM
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true love really is a mixture of pain and joy of tears and laughter.
posted by
Kabu
on July 10, 2008 at 9:11 AM
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I think this is tremendous. At some point in time the weeping must stop! I agree with Mariaki's comment! sam
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sam444
on July 10, 2008 at 9:08 AM
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posted by
lestate7
on July 10, 2008 at 4:20 AM
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WOW this is simply awesome my dear Sinome
excellent work indeed; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 10, 2008 at 4:00 AM
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This just has to have a five
rating....Splendid, stunning and very very touching..WOW!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 9, 2008 at 11:31 PM
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Oh this is such a deep, deep --- thoughtful-pensively and poignantly and to be cherished, work of art!~ Oh! this made tears well, Marta ~ Sinome!~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 9, 2008 at 10:01 PM
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Absolutely stunning, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 9, 2008 at 9:54 PM
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