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Absolutely remarkable, the way the pain of it all is brought in language so live; words, straight from the heart put on paper, can still be seen to be throbbing. Fantastic! Well done, dOlly 
This was earlier
Today this, Lafz dil ban kar ... kaagaz par dhadak rahe hain, words, becoming my heart, are throbbing on paper, So poetic!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 11, 2008 at 7:28 AM
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This is great!!~ Write on!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 10, 2008 at 6:10 AM
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Striking imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 9, 2008 at 10:33 AM
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gripping indeed!
posted by
spinner
on July 9, 2008 at 8:53 AM
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wow.... very gripping!!!
posted by
RomaKay
on July 9, 2008 at 7:59 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on July 9, 2008 at 7:27 AM
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