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Re: Re: Amazing post
will do
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 12, 2008 at 6:59 PM
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Re: Amazing post
Thanks Smittenheimer! :) Glad you like it. :D Keep coming back for more! :D
Hobbitgirl
posted by
Hobbitgirl
on July 11, 2008 at 8:05 AM
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Amazing post
You got us hook, line and sinker with this beautiful poem
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 11, 2008 at 8:02 AM
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wow!!
posted by
Star5_
on July 10, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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I like your style...
and I like the way you capitalized key words here --- like emphasizing --- You are an excellent and creative writer. Welcome ~ Please, Write on!!!~ Elyse (and thank you for visiting my blog
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posted by
elysianfields
on July 10, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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Great poem.........
I love the word 'slumber' you got me right in that first line, what a great poem. I love your work and look forward to visiting your blog again soon and hopefully to welcoming you to my own blog. HollyBird.xx
posted by
HollyBird
on July 10, 2008 at 7:20 AM
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A superb piece!
Thank you for this and for your visit, much appreciated, God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 10, 2008 at 6:37 AM
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A most excellent write! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 9, 2008 at 10:41 AM
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posted by
RomaKay
on July 9, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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"Dreams surge through me like the waves of the sea- "
Thank -you Hobbitgirl! You really captured this subject well. I absolutely loved it. I think I was in this position this morning. I can't wait to read anyhting else you have to offer.
posted by
Kobriel
on July 9, 2008 at 7:49 AM
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