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I know this is a very difficult time but I applaud you for writing and writing! I think it good to discover these emotions as well. It will make you a better poet! Blessing to you! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 11, 2008 at 4:26 PM
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Really powerful poem........
What a powerful poem, I really enjoyed this post and I look forward to coming back again and reading more. Thankyou for your visits to my blog. HollyBird.x
posted by
HollyBird
on July 11, 2008 at 2:16 PM
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Stand fast, endure
Today's unbearable agony
Makes tomorrow's love more deep, more pure,
To appreciate true love, be hurt, be lonely
When the moment comes her light will mend
Your pain, with a joy which doesn't end.
Good writing, my friend, just remember that things do get better.
posted by
lionreign
on July 11, 2008 at 1:48 AM
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um, deep too.
posted by
Sudanym_
on July 10, 2008 at 11:14 AM
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Well written and certainly deerp. Nice sincere afterthought too.
posted by
Sudanym_
on July 10, 2008 at 11:13 AM
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Re: hmmmm.....
Interesting about emotions versus intuition, prefering the latter be stronger and the former less prevailing. Very nice read
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 10, 2008 at 10:26 AM
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I didn ’ t know all the joy that love can bring … Melancholy drapes the night but morning breaks eventually … Take care, BCA!
posted by
BC-A
on July 10, 2008 at 4:10 AM
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Emotions are often trivialized much to my chigrin
I find they add great things to life and are highly underrated in this society. I am well aware how devastating they can be but too they are often very renewing and rewarding. I hope your heart ache is eased by happy ones...
posted by
mysteria
on July 10, 2008 at 3:05 AM
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Hi, Mike - I'm emotional too. We are feelers more so than we are thinkers. That's tough sometimes.
posted by
Hilow
on July 9, 2008 at 1:39 PM
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hmmmm.....
Our emotions sometimes it acts like our intuition and get us out of trouble sometimes too it keeps us in a place we don't want. Nice poem, been out for a while but came back to meet some nice poetry. Sophie.
posted by
safriyie
on July 9, 2008 at 1:07 PM
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Your thoughts on emotions is a great write. I can relate. Sometimes I let my sensitivity get
the best of me. The depth of your heart is beautiful. I also think Dark Moon said it well.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 9, 2008 at 11:26 AM
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"I do not know how much more I can endure..."
Much more than you would believe. Have a little faith in yourself mike...God does.
posted by
Kobriel
on July 9, 2008 at 8:34 AM
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Mike............
statements very well expressed; it's great that you can let them out; you seem to be genuine in your emotions; I hope she sees the you we do and stays; thanks for sharing and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 9, 2008 at 5:16 AM
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What a truly heartfelt poem..I can feel the emotion just leap off the page.."To have loved and lost is better then to not have loved at all.." Take care friend..I know something of lose and it does heal..If the cuts are deep it just takes a little longer..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:26 PM
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 8, 2008 at 9:24 PM
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Teachers much wiser than I say that life is an ocean and that we are continually tossed about by its waves. Up and down. Buffeted to and fro. Pain follows pleasure, dark comes after light, sorrow appears after happiness. The key they say is to find a higher focal point, something like the sailors who followed the north star. Focusing on that star will take you safely to a stable shore. I think you have that higher focus in your devotion to God. And that you take things in stride and wish for the happiness of your girlfriend shows that what you feel is true love, not egoistic self-serving lusts that so many mistakenly call love. Your God, the star that you focus on, will ferry you safely across the ocean of life. There will be good days and bad, storms, hurricane, but, there will also be gentle calm seas. And the main thing is that by holding fast to Him, your boat will not capsize, you will not drown and you will safely reach your goal. Blessings, Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on July 8, 2008 at 9:12 PM
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Awwww, Mike, I heart you!!!! Emotions are just life...unfortunately.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 8, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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The ending invoked emotions in me .. unexpected.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 8, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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Meek
I feel for you and the flood of emotions you're experiencing. Emotions, or at least overly active ones, can be a real drain and blur our vision. Be well!
posted by
Troosha
on July 8, 2008 at 10:59 AM
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