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I liked it..
I liked it alot...
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 12, 2008 at 10:29 PM
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Very well written and expressed..Nice to meet you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 7, 2008 at 10:40 PM
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We follow your eyes ...
to your personal freedom!Take care, BCA!
posted by
BC-A
on July 7, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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very neat write.
posted by
RomaKay
on July 7, 2008 at 7:23 PM
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Entry through the sunshine was a brilliant line. I so appreciate your thoughts. You warm my hart so! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 7, 2008 at 4:54 PM
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This is superb!
Thank you for sharing and also and especially for visiting, much appreciated; take care
posted by
mariaki
on July 7, 2008 at 7:59 AM
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Well expressed !
posted by
afzal50
on July 7, 2008 at 5:34 AM
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I noticed that, too, about the verses...well done!
posted by
Ariala
on July 7, 2008 at 4:41 AM
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Re: Nitetide
The first two lines decided the rest .. i got more like this one on my page .. check them out and comment .. if you wis too.
Thank you (too for asking).
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 7, 2008 at 4:12 AM
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This is an interesting poem!! I noticed that every stanza was in an E-H-H pattern with an intriguing end rhyme for all of them...was this on purpose because I enjoyed it tremendously!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 7, 2008 at 4:05 AM
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