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Excellent! A witty and sad poem about an issue that many identify with love! lol, BCA1
posted by
BC-A
on July 7, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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sad poem but very pretty
i hope you keep writing. i really love your style. you say things like they are, and keep it poetic at the same time. it's definately a gift.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 7, 2008 at 2:12 PM
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re: Image
Hey I've read both posts now - you have a way with words keep it up. As far as the rest...
Those emotions and feelings seem to be keeping you constructively discontent. Thats a sign of someone who can make things happen. But aim higher my friend, make your efforts more than just about weight, include perspective, attitude and health. How can anyone love you for you until you do??
Most importantly do it for yourself, screw society...Pick up a paper, turn on the news or walk around a lot of people. What the hell do we know anyway right??? Get moving and thanks for sharing.
posted by
sly78
on July 7, 2008 at 8:06 AM
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You have taken a step!
Go to that mirror and look passed what you claim is there. Look out side the box and seek the truth with in you and God will guide you to where you need to journey forth.
posted by
kingclay
on July 7, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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I would .. what you saying is wrong .. just wrong.
Something you don't like about you .. try doing something about .. as the Muslims would say, "Half way to God is better than nothing at all" .. be logical and move on with love (for self and others).
I like my T-bone stake .. when a big cunk of it is meat and not bones .. trust me when i say that "overweight" is definitly better than "underweight" .. as long as your health you dont even have to do anything about it .. you are good as you are.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 7, 2008 at 3:54 AM
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i dont know too what you are seeing in that mirror dear, but there is more to it than what our naked eye can see my dear. Rel beauty comes truly from within...the heart and soul of a person matters more than his/her flesh can show. bring down that mirror and feel what is in your heart...there is so much there to show the world. Welcome to blogit my dear...and keep writing!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 6, 2008 at 11:58 PM
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Moshia... I can not look into that mirror... so I can not tell if you are fat or skinny...but I can read what you wrote, and by that I know you are a talented, sensitive and sweet girl. What is inside of you is what counts and what you want someone to love you for. If you do not like the outside...you can change that if you set your heart to it, but you should not get hung up on appearances because they are really not what defines you. You are not a fat girl, you are , among many things that I donot know yet, a poet, and that is a wonderful thing for someone to be. Write on sweetie, I am looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Oh and welcome to Blogit :-)
posted by
Sinome
on July 6, 2008 at 11:21 PM
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