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Excellent
Beautifully phrased. we do have to live and relive until our book is finished.
posted by
skye08
on July 8, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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Pat B my dear...i am not familiar with the writer my love, but it is an honor to be compared to anyone already known of their great works, thank you so much dear.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 8, 2008 at 3:58 PM
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My dear, have you ever read the poet Mary Oliver?
I believe your "promise or prayer" idea reflects beautifully this inspirational poet's work. She is a rarity among poets -- a best selling one. Her themes are about nature, about peace and spirit. Keep writing,
posted by Pat_B on July 8, 2008 at 3:20 PM | | reply |
Hi Purple Mermaid
Hope you are having an awesome day
posted by Smittenheimer on July 7, 2008 at 11:11 AM | | reply |
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 8, 2008 at 3:56 PM
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Purple mermaid
I loved this.
posted by
Hilow
on July 8, 2008 at 8:47 AM
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Purple
On the lap of my story I’d carry on for the unfinished chapters ... That was most definitely my favourite line. What an enchanting, introspective piece!
posted by
Troosha
on July 8, 2008 at 8:02 AM
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very nice and the pic is also very pretty, sorry I have stopped by sooner, I dont know what keeps me so busy
posted by
Lanetay
on July 8, 2008 at 6:24 AM
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Awesome work indeed...Just like a flow of a gentle stream that leads to a growing river..Bravo!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 7, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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Promising Indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on July 7, 2008 at 8:44 PM
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great
i love your poetry, it's beautiful
posted by
lyknliken
on July 7, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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Excellent! 
We see your vision, and feel your beautiful realization of self love! lol, BCA!
posted by
BC-A
on July 7, 2008 at 7:21 PM
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Purple Mermaid11,
You write with such energy. And thank you very much for all of the times you have visited my blog.
posted by
Feenix
on July 7, 2008 at 4:10 PM
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Mermaid, you've given us lots to think about here, and that pic fits what
you've written so perfectly..well done.
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posted by
Rumor
on July 7, 2008 at 1:40 PM
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Beautiful Jen...........
there is something magical about flowing water; I just love the feel of rain on my skin; excellent piece my dear friend; thank you and God bless always
posted by
mariaki
on July 7, 2008 at 5:36 AM
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Beautiful poem.
And .. poetry for me is an emancipated way of expression in what so ever way (old or new rules don't matter to me) .. it's what the poet is trying to say that matters .. in which creative manner does not matter at all .. i'm not looking for those stuck-ups who wanna have everything their way .. i like the creative soul that understand the real .. learn from others but don't copy.
Thank you (too for been you) and stay you.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 7, 2008 at 5:09 AM
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...so lovely
posted by
magic_moon
on July 7, 2008 at 3:05 AM
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Dearest Jen writes poetry in a style only she can, and I must tell you this is a beauty. Love from all here to you and yours.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 6, 2008 at 11:05 PM
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you are such beauty darling.
posted by
Kabu
on July 6, 2008 at 9:49 PM
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Dear Jen... this is stunning as always. Only you can write this much and still keep a central idea flowing. Truly Jen you are a great poetess. I am proud to know you :-)
posted by
Sinome
on July 6, 2008 at 9:22 PM
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beautiful
posted by
Star5_
on July 6, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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Soulful this is Jen ~ your pen was inspired and from the depths you created a masterpiece! This is as a pearl ~
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 6, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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very cool, neatly expressed!
posted by
RomaKay
on July 6, 2008 at 7:20 PM
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so true and you express that so well
posted by
Samantha39
on July 6, 2008 at 6:42 PM
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It was so beautiful
Dreamy hon, simply fantastic ;)
posted by Smittenheimer on July 6, 2008 at 5:27 PM | | reply |
This is so beautiful, my heart stopped a moment
to read. I, too, love the rain. Love picture.
posted by winged on July 6, 2008 at 4:26 PM | | reply |
Jen
This is so lovely. I do love to stand in the rain, like a child...and feel the cleansing waters wash over me.
posted by Sunnybeach7 on July 6, 2008 at 4:02 PM | | reply |
so very deep within...
posted by fairygoddess on July 6, 2008 at 3:34 PM | | reply |
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 6, 2008 at 6:19 PM
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