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get all out hon, written well!
posted by
fairygoddess
on July 6, 2008 at 8:27 PM
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Rather poignant. It is laden with imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 5, 2008 at 4:31 PM
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Wow... lots of anger there...Beautifully written it captures that moment when control is not there anymore and there is just rage left. Good work!
posted by
Sinome
on July 5, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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Just nice
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 5, 2008 at 1:33 AM
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