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I just love your poetry! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 5, 2008 at 3:34 PM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 4, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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Okay...so I came back to read it again. I think I love this poem. LOL. Seriously, I see the song writer in you and it's just beautiful. This was such an excellent piece of work....*sigh*
posted by
NiteTide
on July 4, 2008 at 7:09 PM
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...this is fucking beautiful...i'm sorry...i don't mean to upset you or hurt your feelings or anything but...this is fucking beautiful...beautiful...my god! Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on July 4, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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Wow, Pat, this is a new side of you that I see. This was a great poem - the repetition really gave it substance - fantastic.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 4, 2008 at 6:06 PM
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