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The only thing worse than lost love...
Is to never know love at all... You teach us each day by your very actions what love is... Thank you, bless you, bravo
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 7, 2008 at 8:49 PM
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Your excellence is showing through!
posted by
poetperson
on July 5, 2008 at 1:22 PM
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This torn at my heart..WOW! Very nicely done!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 4, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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awww this is sad; painfully sad because if there is 'love' it should never be denied. I guess. WOW...a passionate one here Jen ~ soulfully so. Write on!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 4, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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Resembles Romeo and Juliet!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 4, 2008 at 6:53 PM
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I just had to read this again sweetie
posted by
Kabu
on July 4, 2008 at 2:15 PM
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Beautiful! you are so very talented and I will continue to enjoy and reading on...
posted by
fairygoddess
on July 4, 2008 at 12:10 PM
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Ah!
I could feel the love, it was so tangible...Lovely...I will not be leaving I was just taking time out to say thanks to wonderful persons like you...HAPPY 4th of July
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on July 4, 2008 at 12:00 PM
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Purple Mermaid,
ah ha my ma, hi ! ah ha my ma, hi ! Before commitments make sure you’re with the right friendly soul love! lol, BCA!
posted by
BC-A
on July 4, 2008 at 6:23 AM
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...what love is 'proper', 'natural', 'legitimate' has been interpreted differently by different cultures in different times...brother - sister marriages occurred for Egyptian pharaohs, first cousin marriages are legal some places, not in others, same with uncle - niece marriages. Love is what is important I think. Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on July 4, 2008 at 4:53 AM
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lovers should never be parted
posted by
Lanetay
on July 3, 2008 at 10:39 PM
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Wonderful!
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 3, 2008 at 9:56 PM
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are they first cousins, if so they are not suppose to love in that way,
because same blood
posted by
Star5_
on July 3, 2008 at 8:34 PM
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This is so typically PurpleMermaidish. So touching, so philosophic, and real-life realities of love captured in its truism. Wonderful entry this, my
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 3, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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It's touching indeed !
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posted by
afzal50
on July 3, 2008 at 8:20 PM
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so beautiful almost as lovely as the love Wiley and Kabu share!!!!!!!!!!!!!
in their house of love.
posted by
Kabu
on July 3, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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....surreal indeed!! Beautifully made
posted by
NiteTide
on July 3, 2008 at 6:33 PM
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