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a good thought,
very well expressed!

posted by pelagus on July 9, 2008 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

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Do translate this and give it in youtr blog for the benefit of everyone.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on July 8, 2008 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

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Absolutely remarkable, the way the pain of it all is brought in language so live; words, straight from the heart put on paper, can still be seen to be throbbing. Fantastic! Well done, dOlly

posted by Bhaskar.ing on July 8, 2008 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply

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Bhaskar ji ,wrote this one last night and I am sharing it.

Lagta hai-

           koi chot abhi lagi hai,

           naya zakhm koi mila hai,

           kalm ki dhar painee,

           safhon se lahoo tapak raha hai,

          aaj aankh nam nahin hai,

          saihee sesak rahi hai,

          lafz dil ban kar,

          kagaz pe dhadak rahein hain.

posted by shamasehar on July 8, 2008 at 5:46 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you dOlls, the sher is for the shayar

posted by Bhaskar.ing on July 7, 2008 at 7:11 AM | link to this | reply

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  Bhaskarji, I would like you to read my hindi poem "Zindagi Nama" since you have mentioned your love for shayari.Thanks, for sending that lovely sher.

posted by shamasehar on July 7, 2008 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

dOlly
Phool khiley shaakhon pe naye, aur dard purane yaad aaye. Tum yaad aaye aur tumhare saath zamnein yaad aaye, biend said for the blossoming

posted by Bhaskar.ing on July 7, 2008 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

very true

posted by Star5_ on July 5, 2008 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply