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so I watched the youtube video and as much as that is not my kind of music, lyrics were pretty awesome. They sound alot like what you write!! Bee
posted by
meeks2
on July 7, 2008 at 7:48 AM
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awesome man this is great
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 6, 2008 at 8:20 AM
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Thanks for visiting my blog....
In answer to your question...I left you a smiley face because I came back to read more of your work and you hadn't posted any....it was a smile of...anticipation! HollyBird.x
posted by
HollyBird
on July 4, 2008 at 2:22 PM
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posted by
HollyBird
on July 4, 2008 at 8:53 AM
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here I am knowing too much how you feel, if that helps at all
posted by
Lanetay
on July 3, 2008 at 10:04 PM
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such a sad but beautiful poem. May your anguish pass
posted by
Kabu
on July 3, 2008 at 6:27 PM
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Mike, look at all these wise & supportive comments below....
u already have a good friend circle here..enjoy my friend! - ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 3, 2008 at 5:33 PM
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Amazing...
It is just amazing how the bleeding of your heart bring out the best in you. This will sure come to pass and you will be a better person. Great poem there. Sophie.
posted by
safriyie
on July 3, 2008 at 1:10 PM
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Meek
Such sadness - such "anguish". You have to have felt it (or are currently feeling it) to write such powerful words as these....
posted by
Troosha
on July 3, 2008 at 10:45 AM
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Mike
Like several who have commented I worry about how sad you feel when you write. I've felt that way before. I think its important for you to keep writing and get those emotions out as you see fit.
posted by
Hilow
on July 3, 2008 at 10:28 AM
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My dear friend...
What words you write. Often I find myself re-reading your poems over and over again. There is a boat- load of feeling in each one. That is what amazes me about you, the emotion you put into each piece is jaw-dropping. Not everyone can do that you know. So let me just say awsome as usual Mike....but I think you need to lighten up a bit, you are starting to make me sad...
posted by
Kobriel
on July 3, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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BMX biking......
Must also mention Mike....yes BMX counts!!! Thanks for leaving the comment.x
posted by
HollyBird
on July 3, 2008 at 6:36 AM
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Beautiful and deep.....
"Anguish is my closest friend
We seem to connect righteously "
What an amazing line and an honest and beautiful poem. Will you accept this flower as a gesture of friendship....
......x
posted by
HollyBird
on July 3, 2008 at 6:22 AM
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Very well expressed my friend
anguish and despair are not the best company; but time conquers all; thanks and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 3, 2008 at 5:04 AM
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A most excellent poem Mike! I have been in the company of this line many times myself!
Anguish is my closest friend Love to you! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 3, 2008 at 5:02 AM
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That is a wonderful heart felt piece. Wonderful write! Bravo! And yes, you have friends standing before you here!
posted by
Nataluna
on July 3, 2008 at 1:39 AM
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Very nice job ... and you know you have many friends here ....
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 2, 2008 at 10:14 PM
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Niiice job, Mike!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 2, 2008 at 10:11 PM
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well expressed yet again my friend...in a world of darkness, there is always a hand to lend a helping hand my dear...open your heart and you'll find the light. Letting go helps heal the wound dear...in time...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 2, 2008 at 10:04 PM
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