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posted by afzal50 on July 2, 2008 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

Hey Kayyz! I love this poem. The soliloquy was fabulous. I especially liked:

Into metaphors
Of ashes
And diamonds.
In this one should find their poetic self! Well done indeed! Love to you!  Shelly

posted by sam444 on July 2, 2008 at 4:22 PM | link to this | reply

Great imagery that just flows to the senses...Leaves you reeling with awe..

posted by Wigopa_ on July 2, 2008 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

all around an overload on the senses... love it, I'm going to go read it again.

posted by RomaKay on July 2, 2008 at 1:04 PM | link to this | reply

"To gather the twigs of sweet nothings"-I specialy love that line!Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 2, 2008 at 12:46 PM | link to this | reply