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I loved the use of jaded! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 30, 2008 at 1:27 PM
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...yep...you're right...you're definitely right...what people don't understand...it is not either/or...it is both...it's called polarity...the eternal play of opposites...pain/pleasure, bad/good, dark/light...always was...always will be...one can be tossed about...to and for...or one can focus on, fixate, attach himself to a polarity... Moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 29, 2008 at 11:23 PM
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Sad indeed ... this poem beautifuly written as it is gives new meaning to jaded. You are very talented my friend, and very hurt. I will pray for you.
posted by
Sinome
on June 29, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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Aw, I'm so saddened by this poem.
It's like the deterioration of innocence...how utterly sad. You have a great write here, Pat - it shows a lot of dimension. I hope you're doing all right!!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 29, 2008 at 8:17 PM
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Exactly! ...
to me w ar is bad on the homefront too ... 
posted by
BC-A
on June 29, 2008 at 7:18 PM
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