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Nice rhythm
With some minor editing, e.g. replacing "that your bringing" with "that you're bringing", it would be ready for publication.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on June 30, 2008 at 7:18 AM
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Good vibes!
your poem actually rocks!
posted by
BC-A
on June 30, 2008 at 6:40 AM
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