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I reiterate, you are a 'dear' friend...as this tribute must touch the heart of the intended.  This is beautiful, sad and moving but...I do feel 'hope' from your lovely lines. ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 1, 2008 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

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yes Troosha...it is sad... Thank you.

posted by Sinome on June 29, 2008 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you 101... unfortunately that is the way it goes...it will ad to their baggage and whoever comes after will have to deal with it .  Thank you for commenting

posted by Sinome on June 29, 2008 at 9:18 PM | link to this | reply

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You are right Lustor...that is why this friend of mine is so special :-)

posted by Sinome on June 29, 2008 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Love never dies..it only hybernates :)! - Ash
Cute Ash :-)  thank you so much.

posted by Sinome on June 29, 2008 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Amen to love.
Amen indeed,  but endings can be painful. 

posted by Sinome on June 29, 2008 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Simone
Thank you so much Nautikos...

posted by Sinome on June 29, 2008 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

Simone
The end of a relationship is always painful, but it can also lead to a new beginning...

posted by Nautikos on June 29, 2008 at 7:52 PM | link to this | reply

Amen to love.
 It lives forever! Heart Shell 





posted by Kolekshuns on June 29, 2008 at 6:43 PM | link to this | reply

Love never dies..it only hybernates :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on June 29, 2008 at 1:54 PM | link to this | reply

a man that feels pain is rare

posted by Lanetay on June 29, 2008 at 10:02 AM | link to this | reply

This is prevalent in Western society. The next guy and girl will have the burdens of this love- gone- cold to shoulder! Very good snapshot of reality!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on June 29, 2008 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

  It's so very sad when this happens....

posted by Troosha on June 29, 2008 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply

...love and pain are siamese twins with love also being the balm..

posted by magic_moon on June 29, 2008 at 3:28 AM | link to this | reply

I just loved this tribute...Bravo Sinome...I found this so touching...with so much heart..I so enjoyed it..Thank you for sharing...

posted by Wigopa_ on June 28, 2008 at 11:27 PM | link to this | reply

oh my sinome.....

posted by Star5_ on June 28, 2008 at 9:34 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful. nice way to bring some hope into a sad story.

posted by RomaKay on June 28, 2008 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

A very beautiful word gift! It will be magical when it happens again.  sam

posted by sam444 on June 28, 2008 at 3:30 PM | link to this | reply

well, just beautiful..
sorry for the pain for i know it sucks hard but you did great on this poem...mike

posted by meeks2 on June 28, 2008 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply

*sigh* it is hard to help those who do not want to see the light at the end.  But we stay strong for them, in hopes that they will stand again.    Wonderful poem, as always!!

posted by NiteTide on June 28, 2008 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

Sad one,,,very well written, my friend...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on June 28, 2008 at 11:58 AM | link to this | reply

so sad sinome .. my heart is with your friend. The emotianal pain
can be so overwhelming when it's over - only time will heal the wounds.  Beautifully written, as always

posted by VictoriaP on June 28, 2008 at 11:40 AM | link to this | reply