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Beautiful, your definitely passionate about writing, its so true, the world would be a better
place without all the interference.
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yellowrose55
on June 28, 2008 at 7:16 PM
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Re: Wow those words were so familiar to me
Kobriel - Thanks for the words of encouragement. It's probably a bit much to hope that a little poetry can open our eyes, but at least it feels much better to get it out. At least a few people are listening. I'm glad you liked it. - Chris
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Marineair
on June 27, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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Wow those words were so familiar to me
In a few ways very like the words I use myself when describing dissatisfaction with the world. We are a desensitized nation and culture, there is no doubt. I don't think we are more demoralized than our ancestors, but we do publicize it more than any other generation. Nothing is too depraved for the public eye...nothing. Isn't it strange that we've come to this, a massive loss of decorum( excuse my use of a dying word). Where did our sense go? Your poem is really great, and I for one am riding the same bandwagon.
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Kobriel
on June 27, 2008 at 6:54 AM
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