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I bet it would be nice down there, Vicki...
...I wouldn't mind visiting there myself.
posted by
metalrat
on July 8, 2008 at 4:23 PM
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Awesome job!
You know you are welcome anytime to visit my little newly discovered harbor!
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 7, 2008 at 9:07 PM
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I like this one very much!
posted by
Ciel
on July 7, 2008 at 2:50 PM
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Elyse, coming from a real poet like you this is a huge compliment...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 6, 2008 at 4:06 AM
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I want you to know Naut that I have read this umpteen times ~ and each time...a different effect. but all the effects of ~ sigh and rhythm and imagery and all, stunning ~ WRITE ON!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 4, 2008 at 10:05 PM
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Thanks, OTA. That was the idea, of course...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 3, 2008 at 5:57 AM
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Even you name, Naut , reminds me of the sea. Beautiful! ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 2, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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Thanks, Shelly! Don't know about 'multi-talented', I just try my hand at a little occasional poetry...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 26, 2008 at 5:21 PM
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Thank you very much, Sinome...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 26, 2008 at 5:19 PM
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Thanks TAPS! It's high praise indeed to be compared to John Masefield, who was also a real sailor, instead of just an amateur like myself...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 26, 2008 at 5:18 PM
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Re: Heart in rythm with...
Thanks, rhondanelle...though I really don't know much about Angels...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 26, 2008 at 5:15 PM
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Naut! You are so multi-talented. I think you could write anything you wanted and at a high level! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on June 25, 2008 at 7:24 PM
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Beautiful haiku Naut... I love the way it ties the beat of your heart to the mist of the morning and the echoing sounds of the boat... lovely.
posted by
Sinome
on June 25, 2008 at 11:51 AM
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Just as Lovely as this one....
"I must go down to the seas again, to the lonely sea and the sky,
and all I ask is a tall ship and a star to steer her by;
and the wheel's kick and the winds song and the white sail's shaking,
and a gray mist on the sea's face, and a gray dawn breaking....."
posted by
TAPS.
on June 25, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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Heart in rythm with...
Those you love
Angels you lost
The pounding of the Universal laws? Thank you
posted by
poetperson
on June 25, 2008 at 9:05 AM
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