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I think this is outstanding! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 24, 2008 at 10:42 AM
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good and bad ...
in all of us ... we feel both joy and melancholy ... Shakespeare and jazz songwriters describe both through their stories, and I feel both in this poem. It leaves you with something to think about yourself. We all identify with the emotions anywhere!
posted by
BC-A
on June 24, 2008 at 3:24 AM
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Very nice ... I will read the others as well.
posted by
VictoriaP
on June 24, 2008 at 12:06 AM
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If you liked this...
...thank you so much for the kind comments. I'd be interested to see what you think about its companions. Talent:Poison was written along the same lines as the previously posted Tear the Ground and Withheld. They're both written in a darker vein, and I think they all complement each other. Let me know what you think. Thanks for reading! - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on June 24, 2008 at 12:01 AM
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I loved this!
posted by
tyleness
on June 23, 2008 at 11:47 PM
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Simply Brilliant !
posted by
DeeJay101
on June 23, 2008 at 11:42 PM
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