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Came in the second time and this spoke to me even more beautifully, delta home

posted by Bhaskar.ing on June 23, 2008 at 11:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Ash
WOW..I am happily surprised to have made you speechless..Thank you soo much for enabling me to come up with this tale..the warrior...well he should be gentleman as he is only in my dreams...Thanks again my friend...

posted by Wigopa_ on June 22, 2008 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nitetide
If we all could fall in love like that...Having high standards is good..Though you want to make sure that they are still attainable..Thank you soo much for the great comments and So nice to meet you!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 22, 2008 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Elyse
Much thanks..So glad you are enjoying them..Hugs to you!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 22, 2008 at 9:55 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Dark_Moon
I thank you much for the awesome comment..To write a book would be an awesome thing indeed..As for my day jobs..Well I will keep those just in case..

posted by Wigopa_ on June 22, 2008 at 9:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re:Bhaskarji
Much thanks my mentor for the sweet comments..You honor me with such awesome comments..to your desert sands...

posted by Wigopa_ on June 22, 2008 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re:SS
So glad you enjoyed..Thank you soo much!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 22, 2008 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

I'm speechless, Marion, this is soo different than your initial work..
write on, u've already mesmerized the readers..and hey, that warrior sure sounds like a gentleman, knows how to treat ladies right :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on June 22, 2008 at 7:07 PM | link to this | reply

WOW.  How beautiful!  I want to fall in love like THAT.  You've just upped my standards.  LOL!!

posted by NiteTide on June 22, 2008 at 1:47 PM | link to this | reply

Wigopa I am enjoying this whole series ~ Write on...!!!! Awesome ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 22, 2008 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

hmmm...i left off the

posted by magic_moon on June 22, 2008 at 5:18 AM | link to this | reply

...i think you would be best seller...write a book...fantasy of course...and you can quit your day job...moon

posted by magic_moon on June 22, 2008 at 5:18 AM | link to this | reply

Marion
What a fine rendition of a tale! You are exceptionally talented. In a while, I must read your earlier enty too.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on June 22, 2008 at 1:07 AM | link to this | reply

Marion ~.~
Beautiful! I was there...searching, too, with excited anticipation. Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on June 21, 2008 at 11:43 PM | link to this | reply