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I enjoyed your "I am" drive to express yourself. I almost think I know you. Did you go to college in Texas? What a strange coincidence that would be. I enjoyed your poetry.
posted by
michaudblaine
on June 24, 2008 at 9:05 PM
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gorgeous!
posted by
pelagus
on June 24, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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I think this was the one you were telling me about the other day. I was really surprised, not what I was thinking but I enjoyed it. Honestly I've always liked poems that rhymed.
Bethany
posted by
meeks2
on June 22, 2008 at 5:07 PM
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Your poety may rebuild!
My soul damaged but as you, God and His great will, faith has me to rebuild! Your words are great and true!!
posted by
kingclay
on June 22, 2008 at 4:41 PM
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Hey Mike, in my deepest loss I found myself as a poet. This is a great time to write what you feel. I don't think editing is important now but getting everything out is the most important. Post what you need to and know I can be summoned to come read. Just get it out.
The dictionary was my choice for a book to read as a kid. I read it to this day. I know every word I use and at least two definitions. I have just never made myself know at three definitions for each word I know.
Sam I care a great deal about you. I am here!!!!!
Side bar: I only lost out to 'Richard Cory' as his choice of favorite poem. But then who could possibly beat that one. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 22, 2008 at 1:59 PM
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I like this concept
posted by
Lanetay
on June 22, 2008 at 11:46 AM
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Keep the faith
(but it sounds as though you do)
posted by
Troosha
on June 22, 2008 at 10:43 AM
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Second reads are so glorious! Peace and blessings my fiend. I so enjoy your visits to my blog. You bring a smile. Thank you! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 22, 2008 at 5:05 AM
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Incredibly well written. Loved the read
posted by
Sinome
on June 21, 2008 at 9:54 PM
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Though quick and seemingly contradictory at first... this poem holds no "true" contradictions. And I was blown away by it's simple sincerity. It makes me think of Naphtali which means "My Wrestling." I'm sorry if I seem to be straying from the point, I have a fascination for the study of names, and your poem made me recall the Biblical name.
We wrestle continually with our day to day selves, the Spirit and flesh are in constant opposition. A peace follows the triumphs of the Spirit, and failures give way to depression and (hopefully) remorse. It is humanity.
You have crafted a really wonderful poem, I hope to hear more of what God has put on your heart......with friendship and love Erica
posted by
Kobriel
on June 21, 2008 at 1:57 PM
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...life is not so easy but, with the understanding and faith that you have and the determination and perseverance you exhibit...you will become that pure gold and shine brightly as a blessing to others...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 21, 2008 at 1:46 PM
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And then ye shall be pure gold! The finest the heavens have to offer! Striking and captivating imagery. It bodes a second read.
Side bar: My son did not know it was about him at the time in the context it now reads. I hid in a second meaning. I said to him that I was his strength and I loved him deeply and always know I am there. I said to remember the poem, and when frustrated pretend he was out on his fishing boat at our local lake and experience the poem. Ya right. He basically forgot about. But the last idea I planted was that one day I would show him how much I knew about him. I got the other son equally. Those poor boys of mine always, still do, have to be on their toes around me. Thanks for listening, it was fun to share this with you. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 21, 2008 at 12:37 PM
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Going through the furnace.
"I am going through the furnace to be refined" that is absolutely right, you know sometimes we may not be able to figure everything out. The most important thing is realising that all that is not in vain but for a good purpose. Just focus on that and it will take you places and you will not loose sight of the reason for going through all that. Then in the end the puzzle will all fit and you will get the bigger picture too. wonderful poem. Sophie.
posted by
safriyie
on June 21, 2008 at 11:34 AM
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