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No problem at all. No offense was taken. I'm not one who is in the position to judge anyone, especially not one who mirrors my own lack of sobriety. Have a glorious day, as offensive as that may sound to one who likes to be gloomy...'cause I hate it when people say that shit to me...nevertheless, I mean it. Peace, Moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 21, 2008 at 9:14 AM
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Thx for saying nice things to me youz guyz and i apologize for being rude and somewhat incoherent. You were all making sense, me, not so much.
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 21, 2008 at 9:09 AM
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no, up. Why did you say that?
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 8:27 PM
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...oh and down is an illusion...
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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..you're brilliant...if bhaskar says it it is so...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 8:20 PM
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i don't think anyone gets it
people think up up up
gravity goes...
(hi peeps)
get it
for now?
Rhymes with frown
OK?
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 8:18 PM
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Pawn, sent you an e-mail.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 8:17 PM
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OK, to rap it up, "nutjob me"...thank you ladies and gentlemen
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 8:09 PM
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Moon, yes he inded is brilliant. Only he has to realize it. Right now he's in a depessive state. He'll know only when he comes out.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 20, 2008 at 8:04 PM
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Bhaskarji...I think Pawn is an elevated soul who doesn't yet know who he is...he's very bright...very creative...very sensitive...he's definitely and 'old soul'....Moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 8:01 PM
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....and song writing!!!!! (Which I still want to see by the way!!!!!!!!!!!!)
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 8:00 PM
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Pawn, from the downs that you are in, you’ll be exalted. I do see purity in your poems, pouring out only that the heart has spoken. Write on, only poetry is therapeutic for you.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 20, 2008 at 8:00 PM
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Pawn, from the downs that you are in, you’ll be exalted. I do see purity in your poems, pouring out only that the heart has spoken. Write on, only poetry is therapeutic for you.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 20, 2008 at 7:59 PM
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you'll do good
don't worry
ok?
i hafta say this
because i am NOT a fraud
you'll probably do good
i can't guarantee it
ok?
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:53 PM
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....am I forgiven?
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 7:53 PM
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See, now I did it. I didn't mean "???" to be anything. I just didn't understand your question and wanted clarification. But apparently I bent your ego out of shape too. Sorry, Pat. I totally didn't mean to do that at all!!!!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 7:50 PM
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???=my comfort zone. thx for notin'. da bot ta yaz
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:48 PM
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See Pat, you got me all confused again. Sorry.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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i said that, before you did. my bad
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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ok, that was stupid, "forget about it"
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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Re: Nite Tide
???
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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Nite Tide
Do me a favor
an' just be with me right now...
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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...okay...
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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i disagreee STRONGLY! with you sir: There is no bottom. SEVER DEPRESSION STARTS AT WHAT IS CALLED "THE BOTTOM"
and descends...
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:34 PM
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When you said "surprisingly unintelligent question" I took that as a "That was a seriously stupid thing to say" - so I kind of crumbled for a moment. That's all. You know it's hard to depict emotions on here when it's just words.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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lol...my bad...lol ...go for it NTA
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 7:31 PM
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um, i meant
n t
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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...not so easy to do in the written word...you were looking for the 'bottom'...one way of looking at it is there is no bottom...it's endless....another way of looking at it is you're at the bottom...they're both the same...there's no place further to sink to....you've reached it...which means that you're only waiting to figure that out...and then you'll start back up...it could take you awhile to figure that out...or not...up to you...but you will...guaranteed...think you're already on your way back up...you just don't know it yet...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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You don't hafto, but u cld b kind an tell me what ur talkin bout..ok?
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:19 PM
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...you are on the path to inner strength...you wanted to hit rock bottom first...you think that there is further to go until you hit bottom...there's not...there's no end to it...from that perspective, there is no bottom...from that perspective you are at the bottom...no where lower to go really....eventually one realizes that...realizes that it is a dead end path...and says what the fuck...might as well go up...that's where you are...you could stay there for a decade or so if you wanted to...or a lifetime...or not...who knows...you could even die there and come back and do it again...but bottom line is you are on your way back up...whether you know it or not...it's just how long you want to paddle around where you are...you're very bright and very talented...that's what will ultimately 'save' you...but, hey, ignore me...i don't know anything...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 7:19 PM
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Re: NITE TIDE
Surprisingly unitelligent question. <-- this line to me. I took it to heart. Sorry, I'm sensitive.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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NITE TIDE
How did i hurt you?
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:13 PM
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i'm not a tibetan buddhist
i'm a loser
i'm not ready
for anything
it always hurts me
hey, i don't hafto make sense-------------------i'm a poet
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:12 PM
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Re: N T
Thanks. That hurt, but I'll deal.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 7:09 PM
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...if he wanted a path free of challenge...he would have selected a different one...
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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N T
Surprisingly unitelligent question.
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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..NTA..he's ready for all of this...that's why he is a Tibetan Buddhist..that's why he doesn't run from it...in selecting that path..he asked for it...his soul did...he's on the right path..Moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 7:07 PM
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nah...i have no problem with any of that...my feelings can't be hurt...i'm too old for that nonsense...i think you are one of the brightest and most talented people around...but, i'll tell you when i see what i think are weaknesses.....the weaknesses don't matter to me...i don't care...they just inhibit you...cause you have lots of potential...lots of potential...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 7:03 PM
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wait...women blame the victim? Is that what you meant? Just clarifying.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 7:02 PM
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this will get me minus points
i meant women
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 6:59 PM
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hey, i don't like you right now
but then i like you
because you come straight at me
i respect that
they always come
behind your back..
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 6:58 PM
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okay, I'm going to play stupid here and ask: Pawny, how is Moon "blaming the victim"? I'd like your take on this.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 6:56 PM
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Not interesred. Also, not interesting...
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 6:52 PM
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..there are no victims..guess i'm just stupid..moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 6:50 PM
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thought you were more intelligent than that. ie blaming the victim
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 6:48 PM
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Your impication is clear...turned me off.
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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...one person's heaven is another person's hell...one person's pain is another person's pleasure...i know people who love being sick and in pain...i know someone very well who is like that...i've know her for many decades....she loves suffering...and she does suffer...she has lots of pain....physical pain....moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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What is the 1st thing you say when something unbelievably great happens to you? 'I CAN'T BELIEVE IT". Noone in pain or suffering feels that way...YOU BELIEVE IT'S REAL.... STRONGLY!!!
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 6:25 PM
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...of course it is a hell realm...or a heaven realm...as you choose...it's all in your mind...it's all an illusion...you don't think that any of this is REAL.........do you? moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 5:13 PM
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hahaha, I come back and what do I find? You edited your poem already! LOL!! Wow, that was F-A-S-T! I think it was great before, but I'm sure your singing soul was not satisfied with what you had, and all that matters is what your heart says.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 5:07 PM
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...you have a lot of talent...it remains to be seen what you will do with it although i think the die is cast...that's not always irrevocable...just 99.9999999% of the time...why not? doesn't everything have to exist in order for the universe to maintain balance?...are you familiar with philip k. dick? moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 4:48 PM
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How curious! This is so different from the others I have read....I think I like it!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 20, 2008 at 4:39 PM
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