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posted by
sam444
on June 20, 2008 at 2:59 PM
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I’m positive that I’ve never used ‘fragrant lillies’, ‘saffron’ or ‘cashmere’. I don’t think that I have used ‘epiphany’. I’m pretty sure that I have used ‘sunrise’, ‘sunset’, ‘shimmering’, and probably ‘emerald’. An I KNOW that I have used ‘diamond’, ‘gold’, and ‘golden’ (but probably not ‘emboldened’). ‘Course I use ‘fuck’ and ‘death’ and ‘bleeding’ and ‘pain’ and ‘torment’ a lot. Okay…so bottom line?....I stink? Moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 20, 2008 at 12:24 PM
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hey, i wanna thank everyone for there comments-they were basically positive. i sure do confuse people, probably becvause life confuses me. i'm all messed up and i drink too much and i write to let out my anger. i try not to get angry at anyone specific (well, maybe the current prez) i try not to get angry at anyone, actually, but at "things". Troosha, sorry i was juswt scanning looking for some typical poetic sounding words, i didn't really read it, but i'll go back. And as someone said, "if ya gotta go, ya gotta go"; let's see, down the hall and to the left.
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 20, 2008 at 8:47 AM
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Pawn
Ummm... guess you didn't like my poem in which I used the words
saffron and
cashmere. But then if I follow the the no rules theory even those ooey gooey words are a "go". I can't decide if your prose are humorous, dark, or angry (or all 3). But I liked the read...
posted by
Troosha
on June 20, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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pawn
Sinome says it just right and just got an idea btw,why don't you write one on Crap rules the rulers of Crap?
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 20, 2008 at 4:56 AM
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You know what? behind the anger and the profanity you are a very talented poet. You say what is in your heart , in an honest in your face way that is unique to you and reminiscent of rap poets. I like you :-) and I loved that amazingly sincere poem.
posted by
Sinome
on June 19, 2008 at 11:13 PM
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Eh! What's this crap
poetry
posted by
BC-A
on June 19, 2008 at 8:36 PM
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I'm sorry, can I laugh? This was funny to me! It's so derisive and truth-ridden that I'm laughing at the irony of it all. I see the talent now. BRAVO!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 19, 2008 at 6:12 PM
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