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Re: Re: Ash..I thank you so much for the inspiration...
in that case i better go get a white horse..since we know the princess owns a smart mare and rides around with her beautiful long auburn hair flying...hahaha...don't worry bhaskarji & pa, this is all for fun between us aspiring poets..your care & advice r always welcome :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 20, 2008 at 10:05 AM
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Re: Kolekshuns
Thank you for the great comments!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:49 PM
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Re: Re: Ash
LOL..I see you are enjoying this..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:43 PM
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Re: Papa"SFJoseph"
It has always been your helpful comments like these that have helped me get to where I am now..Thank you Dad..You are awesome..I do believe that he has a job..LOL..Does being a warrior still count in this day and age..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:42 PM
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Re: Soul_Builder101
Thank you Dave!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:40 PM
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Re: Scramble"Chris"
Thank you soo much for the awesome comments!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:33 PM
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Re: Troosha
Thank you soo much for the truly grand comment!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:31 PM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you so much for the kudos...I do benefit from those excellent meditations(Thank you) you provide for us..Much love to you and yours..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:29 PM
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Re: OnRain
Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:15 PM
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Re: Mariaki
Much thanks..So glad you enjoy..Great to see you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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Re: Bhaskar.ing
I agree is was very well done of Ash..I promise that there will be no trouble..Thank you soo much for the great comments..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 11:12 PM
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Re: Purple_Mermaid11
Yes dear Jen you have..I am so happy you are enjoying this...Thank you soo much..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 10:34 PM
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Re: Cheugon
So glad you are enjoying this fairy tale..Thank you soo much!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 10:31 PM
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Re: Ash
I thank you so much for the inspiration..I have always been a romantic at heart..Just these days I haven't really had the chance to show it..Since your words were the reason I wrote it..I knew you had dark hair and brown eyes so I thought I would place you in the Palace with the princess..I hope you don't mind..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 10:27 PM
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Re: Dark_Moon
Good question..I am still waiting..lol..Thank you much for the great comments...
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 10:23 PM
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Re: Romakay
Much thanks to you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 10:15 PM
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Re: Elyse
I am so glad you enjoyed..Thank you so much for the wonderful comments..I was getting worried since I wasn't thinking of anything to write...Now with this I have a place to go..and something to write..Much love to you and Chett..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 19, 2008 at 10:14 PM
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Very beautiful poetry.
I love it!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 19, 2008 at 9:05 PM
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Re: Palace Garden
hahahaha..love it! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 19, 2008 at 8:50 PM
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Palace Garden
As a poet I must say that I enjoyed the poem. Your imagery, and imagination are always brilliant. As a father I say, "Who is that guy, and does he have a good job?"
posted by
SFJoseph
on June 19, 2008 at 8:00 PM
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Very imaginative poem!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on June 19, 2008 at 5:41 PM
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Wonderful wigopa! Wow-in the palace gardens!! What a memorable time!
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 19, 2008 at 1:39 PM
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Wigopa
You captured the moment and the passionate anticipation beautifully!
posted by
Troosha
on June 19, 2008 at 10:56 AM
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Such gripping imagery! Kudos to you my dear! I am so happy you benefit from the meditations! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 19, 2008 at 9:44 AM
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wow!!!
posted by
Star5_
on June 19, 2008 at 7:18 AM
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What a lovely vision my dear!
beautifully written; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on June 19, 2008 at 3:32 AM
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Well done Ash to inspire such a romantic poem from Marion. Marion for the day, please let me latch on to
"The servants have disappeared..
Your excitement bubbles.." ..., and Oh my, now I'm in troubles
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 18, 2008 at 11:37 PM
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have i ever told you how much i adore your poetic artistry my dear one? you have the bliss of tenderness and the spirit of serenity in your pieces my love...so beautiful...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 18, 2008 at 10:25 PM
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I love this...
...like it came right out of a fairy tale. Well done!
posted by
metalrat
on June 18, 2008 at 10:17 PM
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What a lovely, romantic scene you paint, Marion...
nice change from dragonland :)..btw, I do have dark hair & brown eyes..hahaha! Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 18, 2008 at 8:36 PM
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...is love ever requited?...i'm sure it must be...moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on June 18, 2008 at 6:49 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on June 18, 2008 at 4:10 PM
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Beautiful ~ stunning imagery!!!!~ I felt like I was in an old victorian home ~ with gardens and beautiful array of charm gracing and with the romance that follows along by the alluring poetry of the Palace Garden - this is awesome. Just lovely --- wonderful inspiration ~
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 18, 2008 at 4:07 PM
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