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You defınıtely got the ıncantatıon rıght. This is poetry!! Thanks for your comment and I wont slip into a bellY dancıng outfit before I have lost a few more pounds. NO WAY!!
posted by
vogue
on June 24, 2008 at 11:28 PM
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I had missed this one, its amazing, love this style, very modern and Walt Whitmany ) loll is that a word???) By the way, I loved the Sonnets for the Spanish... liked it better than the Washington Poems...and I liked that one a lot. I read it and read it and marveled at the precision of your form and the amazing content. I was, in your own modified words
"entranced. there was nought else that I could do" . I had an English teacher that told me that any fool could write a sonnet, but that the trick was to make it mean something. Well my friend your sonnets are meaningful and beautiful. Congratulations on a wonderful book.
posted by
Sinome
on June 19, 2008 at 10:31 PM
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yes friend.... I like your deep thoughts!!!!
posted by
geekunnel
on June 19, 2008 at 6:45 AM
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Re: cadence
Thanks, sam!
Cadence is, in my opinion, a crucial element of poetry. When something sounds like an incantation, I consider it poetic, whatever its form.
posted by
cpklapper
on June 17, 2008 at 9:29 AM
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Great style carl. I love the verb herb.
posted by
vogue
on June 17, 2008 at 5:54 AM
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aww so beautiful
i agree.. i have not seen this type of poetry to often..great write...mike
posted by
meeks2
on June 16, 2008 at 4:36 PM
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I really liked the cadence! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 16, 2008 at 1:53 PM
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Re: Style of Poetry
Thank you for your kind comment. I accentuated in this poem features in my poems where I loosen the rules of language in prose, particularly sentence structure and separation, in an ocean of consciousness or unconsciousness.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on June 16, 2008 at 10:45 AM
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I like this style of poetry of which I have not seen too often. Bravo! Well done! I
it!
posted by
Nataluna
on June 16, 2008 at 10:20 AM
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