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I'm starting to snicker.......I am blown away by your writing...I don't know if I should be laughing or going....
....perhaps both is appropriate?
posted by
NiteTide
on June 16, 2008 at 6:28 PM
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Oh my unique poet. I so love coming here! I never know what to expect and it heightens my anticipation. I loved, loved, loved this poem. Have a fine day!!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 16, 2008 at 9:13 AM
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Re: thx cr, roma, d moon
...no convincing needed on my part - moon is god, moon is an asshole, therefore god is an asshole...been part of my 'belief' system for quite awhile - blog on, you're an excellent writer - even better, you provoke Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on June 16, 2008 at 8:02 AM
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thx cr, roma, d moon
dark moon, i have learned to control my thinking like you mentioned; it's certainly helpful to a degree. Also, i'm glad you can appreciate a reference to a frog's ass every now and then. And on your final comment, i have this joke called "the asshole god theory" which is self-explanatory, hey aren't we created in his image? And aren't we a bunch of assholes???
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 16, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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I like style!
You definitely have your own! Bravo!
posted by
CRShelley
on June 15, 2008 at 9:14 PM
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how dark and depressing. ture passion comes from it though.
posted by
RomaKay
on June 15, 2008 at 7:55 PM
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...don't mean to piss you off or anything...found a quote that is probably not appropriate or on point...unfortunately it's from the bible but, i'm not a christian so that probably cancels that part out...anyway: Matthew 5:45 He causes his sun to rise on the evil and the good, and sends rain on the righteous and the unrighteous....see what i mean?
posted by
magic_moon
on June 15, 2008 at 7:09 PM
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