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gurlfren...
you are talking my language and I like it alot
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 19, 2008 at 9:13 AM
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Nataluna
There may be a fade in a song of a music box, yet our love will not unwind... Now there's a fabulous line if I ever read one!!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on June 17, 2008 at 9:46 AM
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...two souls as one...there is nothing more intimate...the ultimate union...Moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 16, 2008 at 11:58 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on June 16, 2008 at 10:47 PM
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I love it. The idea of three wishes. Unique beauty.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 16, 2008 at 8:57 PM
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a beautiful love poem that ...
uses the senses, love.
posted by
BC-A
on June 16, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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Very pretty! Expressive use of language and imagery!
posted by
Ariala
on June 16, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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How very lovely Nataluna! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 14, 2008 at 2:23 PM
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Very nice, Nat! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 14, 2008 at 1:15 PM
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You have just expressed...
...a deep and abiding love. Wonderful poem.
posted by
metalrat
on June 13, 2008 at 7:51 PM
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wow your right
hey thanks for the wonderful comment.. it meant a lot because i have been really pushing passed my obsession with her to just loving her for who she is and not just the beauty she has.. and thats what makes me so nervous because she is so pretty i am to lucky to have her but i desire her heart and soul as well so i hope she sees that and i think she knows that.. thank you so much really..and great poem that you wrote.. i take it you still have love for your husband even though he cheated on you? ...mike
posted by
meeks2
on June 13, 2008 at 4:30 PM
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what wonderful images...especially that powerful ending. Very nice!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 13, 2008 at 4:14 PM
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Beautiful poem Natalie, lovely images..
posted by
Sinome
on June 13, 2008 at 3:52 PM
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