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Wonderfully written
Great post
Solita
posted by
mothernature
on June 13, 2008 at 8:28 PM
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Re: thank you!
...;) I'm lovin it!
posted by
G_La
on June 12, 2008 at 9:06 PM
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Very good. Welcome here.
posted by
vogue
on June 11, 2008 at 7:27 AM
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Great build up and finalized with sweet affirmation! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 11, 2008 at 7:08 AM
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great job for a pilot piece my dear! Welcome to blogit! Write on my friend!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 10, 2008 at 5:15 PM
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This was an intriguing poem! The rhyming enhanced your words and made the background of desperation that I felt real. Bravo!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 10, 2008 at 4:40 PM
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