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Amazing write you took me deep and gave me sound darkness and light.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 28, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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so cute when it squeaked
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 27, 2008 at 9:42 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on June 29, 2008 at 6:58 AM
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Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 18, 2008 at 4:22 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on June 12, 2008 at 9:15 AM
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Fascinating tale.
Nice.
posted by
SeshuWho
on June 11, 2008 at 6:45 AM
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Excellent, I have a new take on caves. Well done, indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 9, 2008 at 2:38 PM
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Good work
I've posted a reply to your comment on my blog.
I'll be waiting for an email from you.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on June 9, 2008 at 11:23 AM
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The 'squeak' is perfect--makes me think of bats!
Thanks for taking up the challenge, Straightforward! You captured the darkness and the quiet content and vibe of a cave like this.
posted by
Ciel
on June 9, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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Reminds me of the caves in Italy..Wonderful write!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 9, 2008 at 12:35 AM
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I found it. Goes right with the pic.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 8, 2008 at 11:45 PM
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