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Exquisite poem! mom
posted by
sam444
on June 10, 2008 at 4:27 PM
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Hi purple mermaid. How are you feeling? Getting a bit stronger I hope. Thanks for your cards. I do apreciate them tremendously. Tschüs.
posted by auslander on June 9, 2008 at 1:15 PM | | reply |
Hi Purple M. Glad you're back. I'm 50/50! But I always say hello!
posted by Soul_Builder101 on June 9, 2008 at 7:43 AM | | reply |
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 10, 2008 at 6:35 AM
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Like that quote at the end
posted by
Straightforward
on June 9, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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Ah, since I am new, I don't know the details, but I have come to realize that there must be something you have been fighting against, seemingly for a long time now. Whatever problems you have or are facing, I hope they disappear from your life like the wind someday. This poem was beautiful but dripping sadness at the same time. But you are right, because it takes a lot of living (and not just in years) to get to an ending that is triumphant.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 9, 2008 at 6:48 AM
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It's so good to see you Jen!
I hope you are feeling better and your demons laid to rest permanently
This is so very beautifully done; thank you and God bless you and yours always
posted by
mariaki
on June 9, 2008 at 4:52 AM
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Mermaid
"She has built well composed camaraderie
With the valiant personas inside her"
superb stuff
posted by
lindo
on June 9, 2008 at 1:37 AM
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I agree with Sinome..You must not over extend your self..I hope you are well..This was superb work..A great read that got me thinking about how I am who I am..Then about what my daughter might be...Very sweet and powerful mixture..Awesome work!
(If you didn't noticed I have been trying to play catch up..My daughter's last day of school ended for teh summer so we have been finding lots to do..)
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 8, 2008 at 11:01 PM
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Jen...this was beautiful, but I do not want you straining y ourself to write these deep hurful poems, No sweeite, write about happy things, smiles, Shae, your son, write about a bright future, You are so percious Jen, you must try and not be sad, not drain yourself by writing such amazing verses. I love you very much and want you well. what ever it takes. Take care of you please.
posted by
Sinome
on June 8, 2008 at 10:32 PM
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Touching, stirring . . . Gets me thinking?
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 8, 2008 at 9:03 PM
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Oh this surely blesses all --- this reader especially ~ how utterly sensitive and elegant - seedlings to womanhood ~ powerful poem Jen!!!! Write ON~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 8, 2008 at 7:38 PM
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Purple Mermaid plants a seed ...
of poetry that women identify and men relate beautifully co-ed, love.
posted by
BC-A
on June 8, 2008 at 6:38 PM
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said it all....
posted by
Star5_
on June 8, 2008 at 6:20 PM
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