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Absolutely delightful! See, this is the type of
happy poem I wish I could write. I'm as happy as I can be, but I can't seem to eek out anything but sad poems, lol. Thank you for the entertaining read, such talent. Thank you also for the quote by Eleanor Roosevelt - she was a phenomenal woman.
posted by
VictoriaP
on June 9, 2008 at 5:19 AM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on June 7, 2008 at 3:53 PM
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Oh, so sweet and delightful, mariaki. sam is great!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 6, 2008 at 8:48 PM
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I am with Troosha! I adore the cadence!
I checked my blog to see which poem you thought you might want to try and I think it was (I got so wrapped up in your poem, horray for me, that I forgot what I had just looked up) Sijo. It is unrhymed poetry from Korea. It has three long lines between 14-16 syllables. The middle line is the longest. Line one-state the theme; line 2-counters the theme; line 3- resolves the theme. Good luck. Love, Peace and blessings. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 6, 2008 at 2:47 PM
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Mariaki
What a fun and delightful poem!
Have a wonderful weekend!
posted by
Troosha
on June 6, 2008 at 8:38 AM
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this is a beauty my beloved maria...i have missed you...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 6, 2008 at 7:27 AM
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these are light, angel-winged lines ...sharing your peace & gentle ways
Shalom and Namasthe Dear One. Sorry about the pictures...
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ILLUMINATI8
on June 6, 2008 at 6:10 AM
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