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This is beautiful ~ mesmerizing !!!
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 5, 2008 at 9:54 PM
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Great!
I too
LOVE this one!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 5, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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nice piece!
i really like this one!
posted by
lestate7
on June 5, 2008 at 3:59 PM
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I adore this poem. I am so excited how your poetry is so vivid with excellent imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 5, 2008 at 1:24 PM
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This was an imagery that lead a story----I liked it-----Bravo, very good!
posted by
Nataluna
on June 5, 2008 at 12:41 PM
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Wonderful poem. I especially liked the consonance of "And the breezy wind blows trumps in triumph"
posted by
jmh256
on June 5, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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Awesome!!
Great reading.
posted by
mothernature
on June 5, 2008 at 10:27 AM
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