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As Ariala said.. the last line was great!
posted by
Troosha
on June 5, 2008 at 8:34 AM
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EXCELLENT ! 
posted by
shamasehar
on June 5, 2008 at 7:10 AM
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A Lovely piece my friend!
Excellently done; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on June 5, 2008 at 6:56 AM
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this is gorgeous!
i'm feeling swallowed by your feelings 
posted by
pelagus
on June 5, 2008 at 6:11 AM
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Oooh, I love that last line, especially!
posted by
Ariala
on June 5, 2008 at 5:57 AM
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