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                This is just a simply entralling work that beckons you to read more..Awesome!  
                
                    posted by
                    Wigopa_
                     on June 8, 2008 at 11:08 PM
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 --- this is enthralling ~ and we have to wait for part 3?  LOL...no really, this is too great!!!~ write on!!~ Elyse

  
                
                    posted by
                    elysianfields
                     on June 5, 2008 at 7:25 PM
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                          I am delighted to learn you son is doing well.    
  The form Sijo is poetry of Korea
  It is unrhymed, three long lines. Each line is between 14-16 syllables. The middle line is the longest.
  The first line states the theme, the second line counters the theme, the third line resolves the poem.
  Good luck and have fun!  sam
  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on June 5, 2008 at 5:39 PM
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                This is just fascinating and eerily fun read..I am enthralled in this and awaiting the next installment..  
                
                    posted by
                    Wigopa_
                     on June 5, 2008 at 4:22 PM
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                I am enjoying this series. How is your son doing?  sam  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on June 5, 2008 at 11:42 AM
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                Mystical and 
phasinating....  
                
                    posted by
                    Troosha
                     on June 5, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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                "The sky is bright red, the air is cold as ice, the setting is the valley of bones"  -- amazing opening.  
                
                    posted by
                    jmh256
                     on June 5, 2008 at 6:32 AM
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