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This is just a simply entralling work that beckons you to read more..Awesome!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 8, 2008 at 11:08 PM | link to this | reply

 --- this is enthralling ~ and we have to wait for part 3?  LOL...no really, this is too great!!!~ write on!!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 5, 2008 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

I am delighted to learn you son is doing well.

The form Sijo is poetry of Korea

It is unrhymed, three long lines. Each line is between 14-16 syllables. The middle line is the longest.

The first line states the theme, the second line counters the theme, the third line resolves the poem.

Good luck and have fun!  sam

posted by sam444 on June 5, 2008 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

This is just fascinating and eerily fun read..I am enthralled in this and awaiting the next installment..

posted by Wigopa_ on June 5, 2008 at 4:22 PM | link to this | reply

I am enjoying this series. How is your son doing?  sam

posted by sam444 on June 5, 2008 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

Mystical and phasinating....

posted by Troosha on June 5, 2008 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

"The sky is bright red, the air is cold as ice, the setting is the valley of bones"  -- amazing opening.

posted by jmh256 on June 5, 2008 at 6:32 AM | link to this | reply