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                Love it! This is a great poem, with great PAIN, very different.
  
                
                    posted by
                    yellowrose55
                     on June 8, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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                You know I appreciate this allegory.  I have a copy - and have given a copy or two of this book...it's a simple write and it is a allegory on the 'thorn' of Love ~ Just in case you are ever interested, it's a fast read and very interesting:  Hannah Hurnard, "Hinds Feet on High Places" written in 1955 (and probably her only 'best' book) --- but I thought of this when I was reading your blog ~ 

Elyse  
                
                    posted by
                    elysianfields
                     on June 4, 2008 at 9:23 PM
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                    Oh yeah...
                
                ...the harm we cause ourselves through our own defense mechanisms.
  A familiar theme. 
  
                
                    posted by
                    metalrat
                     on June 3, 2008 at 9:16 PM
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                Ah, but you can still be a rose. Wonderful imagery!  sam  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on June 3, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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                    ...i'm feeling some pain here...(and they say that men can't be sensitive)...very well done....Moon 
  
                
                    posted by
                    magic_moon
                     on June 3, 2008 at 2:06 PM
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                Yes, the imagery is amazing. I see a kind of briar's patch with a soul struggling to get out. (or at least to stay safe and unharmed).  
                
                    posted by
                    jmh256
                     on June 3, 2008 at 9:23 AM
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                The imagery on this one is excellent!  
                
                    posted by
                    Wigopa_
                     on June 3, 2008 at 9:01 AM
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