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These three views always captivate and throw me into another world. Your haiku just put me there.
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 8, 2009 at 9:08 PM
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this is so peaceful.. like wind through chimes
~OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on June 18, 2008 at 9:12 AM
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Very nice!!!!
Now you're makin' me jealous!
But, seriously, this is the kind of imagery that original Haiku was meant to convey, until I came along and did violence to the rules.
posted by
metalrat
on June 11, 2008 at 5:16 PM
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Makes me think beautiful thoughts. Love it.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 3, 2008 at 3:33 PM
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YES ~ this is stunning ~ in all realms ---
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~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 2, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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You have so much imagery, and so well conceived. It touched all my senses! Bravo!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 2, 2008 at 1:15 PM
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Naut
With or without the
honourable mention, I loved it! You're very good at these....
posted by
Troosha
on June 2, 2008 at 11:54 AM
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It's great to see the community inspiring one another.
posted by
jmh256
on June 2, 2008 at 6:59 AM
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