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I like this!
Written very well!
posted by
tyleness
on May 29, 2008 at 2:14 PM
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I love...
the line, "You run like a wild dream and disappear." Talk about fantastic personification! I'm literally imagining my dreams running wild, and I'm having a blast thinking it!
posted by
NiteTide
on May 28, 2008 at 8:53 PM
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I like the imaging. I also like it cause it is short
and to the point. Very good.
posted by
Winged
on May 28, 2008 at 2:18 PM
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the mysitic of this one is great! I love how it just moves you along!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 28, 2008 at 12:58 PM
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Wow, short, eerie, vivid! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 28, 2008 at 7:35 AM
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Great work Kayzz
thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on May 28, 2008 at 7:10 AM
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powerful imagery!!!!
posted by
RomaKay
on May 28, 2008 at 6:34 AM
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I like the "long strange shadows of yourself"
it's a most evocative line. I like the overall dreamy mood of the poem, the sense of being somewhere strangely familiar. :)pat
posted by
Pat_B
on May 28, 2008 at 6:34 AM
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wow
posted by
Star5_
on May 28, 2008 at 6:00 AM
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