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Marvelous work.
posted by
SeshuWho
on June 9, 2008 at 2:14 AM
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Excellent work...wow!
posted by
Ariala
on May 27, 2008 at 3:16 PM
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Pure art ~ It was like visitng the castle and thinking as he did ~ very 'cool' ~ I like your poetry Vogue ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 27, 2008 at 3:06 PM
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It was nice...
that you explained what the poem was about. I was able to capture in my mind, what the castle would be like. Nicely written. The thought of a mysterious death, gave me chills!
Talia
posted by
versatalia
on May 27, 2008 at 1:14 PM
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What a great post, vogue. Thank you for the background that you gave before the poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 27, 2008 at 11:56 AM
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Stunning! An excellent poem my dear vogue. Are you doing okay with all the details to attend to? sam
posted by
sam444
on May 27, 2008 at 11:30 AM
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Your poem rocks!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 27, 2008 at 11:02 AM
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Are King Louis II and King Ludwig the same person? I thought it was Ludwig whom built Neu Schwanstein.
posted by
ZenMom
on May 27, 2008 at 7:11 AM
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vogue
Having been away completely from Blogitville for a couple of weeks, I missed your departure from Miami! And now you're in Bavaria, which I enjoyed on several visits. I even took the boat to Herrenchiemsee, but did not visit the castle, feeling a little 'castled out' on that occasion. And I love your poem! Also, congrats on having your story published!
I know the occasion for this trip is not a pleasant one, but I hope it will somehow bring closure and a greater peace of mind...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 27, 2008 at 7:05 AM
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Great idea to give us the background my friend........
it made the understanding behind the poem easier and gave it an imagery it may have been missing otherwise; very well done and thank you
posted by
mariaki
on May 27, 2008 at 6:16 AM
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Combination of prelude with poetry was a must to make it more understandable.Very interesting story presented in nice soft words.
posted by
chinartree
on May 27, 2008 at 5:41 AM
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Very good poem from you
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 27, 2008 at 5:41 AM
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Glad I am reading....
posted by
Star5_
on May 27, 2008 at 5:13 AM
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Very nice poem!
I can just see poor Ludwig II by the lake realizing that, eventhough he had bankrupted Bavaria for his dreams of grandeur, he could not finish his caslte. Tschüs.
posted by
auslander
on May 27, 2008 at 5:04 AM
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Riveting story. I was not familiar with it. I enjoyed the poem but, would not have understood at all without the prelude. So thanks for that. I like it when Blogiteers tell us what the poem is about. Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on May 27, 2008 at 3:29 AM
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